Thesis Stament

Step 1: Topic: Tennis
Step 2: Issue: makes people relieve stress and more accuracy by playing tennis
Step3: Position + Rational (because- clause): because they can measure the distance and they can take a shoot, they can relax by play tennis.

What I can improve for my story?

I would like to continue writing about the topic: If you can buy one animal to be your pet, what would you choose? Because it can help me to have a lot of vocabulary

Here is some of the link for my Just Right Topic

Tennis
International Tennis Hall of Fame
One of the Tournament of Tennis: Wimbledon

Just Right Topic

What topic is a just right topic for you?  Why?

I think my just right topic is about "Tennis". I choose this topic because I love tennis, I love to play and love to watched him play with two of the powerful tennis play are Roger Federer, and Andre Agassi

Debate Reflection

1. What did you do well? I speak clearly, slow, calmly, and low enough so that everyone can hear it.
2. What could you improve? I need to give more details and don't say uhm or like.
3. Whose speech did you enjoy the most? Why? I like Andy speech because he speak very clearly, he gives remain ideas but it's correct.
4. What speech did you enjoy the most? Why? I speak clearly, slow, calmly, and low enough so that everyone can hear it. I need to give more details and don't say uhm or like.
5. What did you enjoy about debate? It gives me more details about the main character.
6. What did you dislike? Thing that I dislike about this debate is I can't practice much about my feeling because this is not a real debate.

Time I Got Into Trouble

Writing Reflection #4

What did you do well?  How can you improve? 

 Thins that I did well are I have cool beginning, good internal voice "think voice". I used sensory images. Thing that I need to improve is I need to use more dialogue in the very end of the paragraph.