Debate Reflection

1. What did you do well? I speak clearly, slow, calmly, and low enough so that everyone can hear it.
2. What could you improve? I need to give more details and don't say uhm or like.
3. Whose speech did you enjoy the most? Why? I like Andy speech because he speak very clearly, he gives remain ideas but it's correct.
4. What speech did you enjoy the most? Why? I speak clearly, slow, calmly, and low enough so that everyone can hear it. I need to give more details and don't say uhm or like.
5. What did you enjoy about debate? It gives me more details about the main character.
6. What did you dislike? Thing that I dislike about this debate is I can't practice much about my feeling because this is not a real debate.

Time I Got Into Trouble

Writing Reflection #4

What did you do well?  How can you improve? 

 Thins that I did well are I have cool beginning, good internal voice "think voice". I used sensory images. Thing that I need to improve is I need to use more dialogue in the very end of the paragraph.

Blog Assignment # 3: Reflection on Peer Review

What advice do you think is the most helpful to you? Why? What did you learn by reading the other students' work? 

The advice that I think is the most helpful to me is you need to add and try to make it longer because I didn't stretch the my story much and I forgot to write the dialogue (just 1). I learn that I need to interest people, make my story longer and add dialogues.

Blog Assignment #2 Writing Reflection

Question #1: Tell me what you think you did well.
Question #2: How can you improve the next time you write a personal narrative? 
Question #3: Was your personal narrative interesting?  Why or why not? 
Question #4: What grammar errors did you make and how will you correct them in the future?

Answer #1: I think I did well in the last week's test drive is my ending.

Answer #2: What I need to improve for the next test drive is I need to give more information and dialogue.

Answer #3: Yes, because the part the I said I shout at my mom is the part that I think I interest people.

Answer #4: My grammar errors that I made is the past tense mistake and spelling errors

Blog Assignment 1

Part1: One thing I did well is to look at audience. One thing that I need to improve is I need to be more confident.

Part2: I like the dog of Mickey's story because I think it cool.

Part3: I would choose the Hunchback of NotreDame and I would enjoy Esmeralda. I would like to read about the good person/people because I want to be a good person. I wouldn't enjoy the mean or bad person/people because I hate to be a bad person. Example: There is a guy want to still all of the bank's money and after he stole the bank's money, he run to another country and try to still another one. That guy is very bad and I hate that guy.