What advice do you think is the most helpful to you? Why? What did you learn by reading the other students' work?
The advice that I think is the most helpful to me is you need to add and try to make it longer because I didn't stretch the my story much and I forgot to write the dialogue (just 1). I learn that I need to interest people, make my story longer and add dialogues.
Very Good, Ben. Some good advice to yourself. We will give you more chances to practice.
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