What advice do you think is the most helpful to you? Why? What did you learn by reading the other students' work?
The advice that I think is the most helpful to me is you need to add and try to make it longer because I didn't stretch the my story much and I forgot to write the dialogue (just 1). I learn that I need to interest people, make my story longer and add dialogues.Tuesday, September 20, 2011
Saturday, September 17, 2011
Blog Assignment #2 Writing Reflection
Question #1: Tell me what you think you did well.
Question #2: How can you improve the next time you write a personal narrative?
Question #3: Was your personal narrative interesting? Why or why not?
Question #4: What grammar errors did you make and how will you correct them in the future?
Answer #1: I think I did well in the last week's test drive is my ending.
Answer #2: What I need to improve for the next test drive is I need to give more information and dialogue.
Answer #3: Yes, because the part the I said I shout at my mom is the part that I think I interest people.
Answer #4: My grammar errors that I made is the past tense mistake and spelling errors
Question #2: How can you improve the next time you write a personal narrative?
Question #3: Was your personal narrative interesting? Why or why not?
Question #4: What grammar errors did you make and how will you correct them in the future?
Answer #1: I think I did well in the last week's test drive is my ending.
Answer #2: What I need to improve for the next test drive is I need to give more information and dialogue.
Answer #3: Yes, because the part the I said I shout at my mom is the part that I think I interest people.
Answer #4: My grammar errors that I made is the past tense mistake and spelling errors
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