i like the way that you use a good word choice. You don't need to a lot of details. Sometimes a lot of detail is good. My favorite part is at the end of the paragraph
I think your personal narrative is perfect and I think you need to improve on sensory details.-By Daily
i think you personal narrative is good but i think you need to write more about the sensory detail
i like the way that you use a good word choice. You don't need to a lot of details. Sometimes a lot of detail is good. My favorite part is at the end of the paragraph
ReplyDeleteI think your personal narrative is perfect and I think you need to improve on sensory details.
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i think you personal narrative is good but i think you need to write more about the sensory detail
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