Step 1: Topic: Tennis
Step 2: Issue: makes people relieve stress and more accuracy by playing tennis
Step3: Position + Rational (because- clause): because they can measure the distance and they can take a shoot, they can relax by play tennis.
Step 2: Issue: makes people relieve stress and more accuracy by playing tennis
Step3: Position + Rational (because- clause): because they can measure the distance and they can take a shoot, they can relax by play tennis.
can u be more broad on step 3
ReplyDeleteYour thesis statement is awesome, Ben! Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Andy. Step 2 is good because or the relieve stress part. The more accuracy is a bit too specific. You have to make it more broad. Are you talking about eye-hand coordination? For part 3, can you write a paragraph about people taking a shot? or measuring a distance? It may be too specific
ReplyDeleteI like your Topic and your Issue. I think you need to write more about step 3.
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